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This column is for self-study or classroom use and gives guided help with reading the wide variety of writing styles and topics that appear as feature articles in the Bangkok Post. The lessons include background information, skill-building practice and vocabulary explanations.
March 29, 2005


May the force be with you

by NEIL STONEHAM

INTRODUCTION
If you like science fiction, you’ll be looking forward to the latest Star Wars movie, which will be hitting screens here in a few months time. George Lucas, the man behind all the Star Wars movies, has spoken about how he has brought his final film up to date so that it links with the very first Star Wars film – titled Episode 4. Confused? Hopefully, the story here will make things a little clearer, but you can always log on to www.starwars.com to find out more.

For today’s lesson, we are going to look at parts of an article that features an interview with Lucas as well as an overview of the film – Revenge of the Sith.

In the first section, we have printed the opening paragraphs exactly as they appeared in the Bangkok Post, all correctly punctuated. In the second section, however, we have printed the last few paragraphs of the article without any punctuation at all. The third section shows you the last few paragraphs with all the correct punctuation put back in — but try not to look at this until you have completed the exercise.

Your task is to try and put all the punctuation into the second section using the first section and the punctuation notes to guide you. When you have finished, check your worksheet with the fully punctuated version in section 3.

This is quite a difficult exercise, so don’t worry if you get a lot of the punctuation wrong or miss some out. If this is the case, have another go and see if you improve.

It’s always a good idea to use a newspaper or a book as guide to correct punctuation. So, if you are ever not sure where a comma should go or a speech mark should be placed, have a look and see how the professionals do it.

PUNCTUATION NOTES
COMMA
The comma (,) often appears when there should be a slight pause in reading. Read the passage out loud and see if you can figure out where these pauses should be. Commas are also used when we are given some additional information within a sentence or to separate words in a list (“the cat was fat, black and ugly”, for example).

APOSTROPHE
This mark ( ’ ) is usually used to show that one or more letters or numbers have been left out, as in she’s for she is and ’63 for 1963. It also indicates possession as in Christopher’s coat.

FULL STOP
The full stop or period (.) indicates the end of a sentence. The word following a full stop always begins with a capital letter.

QUOTATION MARKS
These marks (“ ... ”) always occur at the beginning and end of speech. Note in column 1 where the commas and full stops appear at the end of a section of speech.

HYPHEN
The hyphen ( - ) is used to join two words together to make a new one, as in back-up. In section 2, look for words that have been put together but look as though they need a hyphen to be understood properly. Hyphenation can be quite difficult to grasp, but if you think logically about structure and sense rather than in theory, it’s a little easier.





 



Putting on the mask

Star Wars” mastermind George Lucas sets stage for Darth Vader’s ascent

DAVID GERMAIN


Director George Lucas directs actor Anthony Daniels, who plays the robot C-3PO, in Star Wars. — AP

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

OPENING PARAGRAPHS
Two decades ago, George Lucas pulled off the mask to reveal the face of one of cinema's greatest bad guys. Now, he's about to slip the mask back on.

Lucas offered a preview on Thursday of his final Star Wars chapter, which spells out the last dark steps the once good-hearted young Anakin Skywalker takes to become the villain Darth Vader.

“It’s not like the old Star Wars,” Lucas told theatre owners at the ShoWest convention. “This one’s a little bit more emotional. We like to describe it as Titanic in space. It’s a tear-jerker.”

Opening on May 19 in the US, Star Wars: Episode III – Revenge of the Sith brings full circle the mammoth sci-fi saga Lucas began in 1977 with the original Star Wars (Star Wars: Episode IV – A New Hope), which shattered box-office records and remains one of the top-grossing movies ever.

Reaction was mixed on Episode I – The Phantom Menace and Episode II – Attack of the Clones, many fans grousing that the first one was too much a kiddie flick and the second one too sappy a love story. Calling the latest movie a Faustian tragedy, Lucas said he is not concerned about whether Revenge of the Sith will draw more barbs from Star Wars fans.

“I feel that I’ve made the movie the best I can and it turned out the way I wanted it to be, so I’m happy,” Lucas, 60, told AP in an interview. “I never try to anticipate what the world’s going to think or even worry about whether they're going to like it or not. That's not my job, to make people like my movies. They either like them or they don't. That’s completely out of my hands.''

The intensity of the action and themes in Revenge of the Sith will probably earn it a PG-13 rating in the US, Lucas said. The first five Star Wars movies were all rated PG.

LAST PARAGRAPHS (NO PUNCTUATION)
The trailer screened on Thursday showed what fans have been waiting for since Lucas began the story of Anakins journey from good toward evil in The Phantom Menace and Attack of the Clones Namely Anakin in the guise of Vader: Black cloak mask and helmet an outfit rigged with lifesupport devices for Skywalker whose battle wounds have left him part flesh part machine

Lucas knows that many fans wanted the prequel trilogy to introduce Vader early on rather than trace Anakins downfall from nice little boy to bratty teen to dark knight of the galaxy Revenge of the Sith presents Anakin in Vaders black getup only at the very end of the movie Lucas said

Obviously fans would love to see a movie about Darth Vader running around killing people said Lucas who was also on hand to receive a galacticachievement award from ShoWest organisers Im not telling that story and Im not interested in that Thats not what the movie is

This first trilogy is really about the father the struggles of a father or a man basically to find himself and at the same time fall into a trap of wanting certain powers making a pact with the devil and basically spending the rest of his life regretting it

LAST PARAGRAPHS (FULL PUNCTUATION)
The trailer screened on Thursday showed what fans have been waiting for since Lucas began the story of Anakin’s journey from good toward evil in The Phantom Menace and Attack of the Clones. Namely, Anakin in the guise of Vader: Black cloak, mask and helmet, an outfit rigged with life-support devices for Skywalker, whose battle wounds have left him part flesh, part machine.

Lucas knows that many fans wanted the prequel trilogy to introduce Vader early on rather than trace Anakin’s downfall from nice little boy to bratty teen to dark knight of the galaxy. Revenge of the Sith presents Anakin in Vader’s black get-up only at the very end of the movie, Lucas said.

“Obviously, fans would love to see a movie about Darth Vader running around killing people,” said Lucas, who was also on hand to receive a “galactic-achievement award” from ShoWest organisers. “I’m not telling that story, and I’m not interested in that. That’s not what the movie is.

“This first trilogy is really about the father, the struggles of a father, or a man, basically, to find himself, and at the same time fall into a trap of wanting certain powers, making a pact with the devil and basically spending the rest of his life regretting it.”

• This lesson was prepared by Neil Stoneham,
an experienced secondary school teacher and trained journalist.

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